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kaidrag0n's fanfic thread
Hey team,
kaidrag0n here just show casing my only artistic talent that I have. Well its not like I know how to draw or paint or anything, but my creative style comes in writing stories. I've written several in the past, well long ago when I was still in high school and its been hard trying to get back into it ever since because of my hectic lifestyle. But now I'm at a point were I can start actually writing again and now I have great inspiration to do so because of all you guys.
For those of you that don't know what a "fanfic" is, its short for Fan Fiction, which its basically a story of sorts based of a popular and licensed media outlet like a TV show or movie. Even other published books can be used for fanfics.
Below is a sample from my work using the world of Phantasy Star Online 2 and the members of our very own SKET Brigade as the basis of this story. A few disclaimers to point out before I contune on: (1) Keep in mind that I'll pretty much treat each individual character as if there were a person, so those with female characters will be treated as she or her for example. The same will go for my character as well. (2) I'll do my best to use our personal nicknames for each other (which are biased off our usernames) but more than likely I might use our actual character names, like Link KD's Youmu or Kakarot's Azure Shadow. (3) I just started to come back to writing so it's not going to be 100% perfect. Just deal with it and I'll impoive as I go along. (4) This is pretty much written in a first person perspective, so I can explain, in better detail what my characters thoughts are towards each and every member of the team, which is in fact much similar to my own so even though I pretty much like everybody on the team, just don't take something I interpret too personalty. Well anyway's enjoy. =P
Well that's pretty much it so far. Hope you enjoyed that sample. It might not be perfect but I'm trying to improve my writing as I go and I might make a few changes here and there. I might continue on the story later on and bring in more members from our team in on this.
If you want go ahead and post your own fanfics here. I'm curious to see how your style is compared to mine. If you are a writing expert yourself, let me know how I can improve. =D
kaidrag0n here just show casing my only artistic talent that I have. Well its not like I know how to draw or paint or anything, but my creative style comes in writing stories. I've written several in the past, well long ago when I was still in high school and its been hard trying to get back into it ever since because of my hectic lifestyle. But now I'm at a point were I can start actually writing again and now I have great inspiration to do so because of all you guys.
For those of you that don't know what a "fanfic" is, its short for Fan Fiction, which its basically a story of sorts based of a popular and licensed media outlet like a TV show or movie. Even other published books can be used for fanfics.
Below is a sample from my work using the world of Phantasy Star Online 2 and the members of our very own SKET Brigade as the basis of this story. A few disclaimers to point out before I contune on: (1) Keep in mind that I'll pretty much treat each individual character as if there were a person, so those with female characters will be treated as she or her for example. The same will go for my character as well. (2) I'll do my best to use our personal nicknames for each other (which are biased off our usernames) but more than likely I might use our actual character names, like Link KD's Youmu or Kakarot's Azure Shadow. (3) I just started to come back to writing so it's not going to be 100% perfect. Just deal with it and I'll impoive as I go along. (4) This is pretty much written in a first person perspective, so I can explain, in better detail what my characters thoughts are towards each and every member of the team, which is in fact much similar to my own so even though I pretty much like everybody on the team, just don't take something I interpret too personalty. Well anyway's enjoy. =P
- Spoiler:
- Keira's Room, 1600 hours
I wake up from my so-called sleep cycle, or what you flesh and blood types call, a daytime nap. I really don't requite much down time at all throughout the entire day. Just a simple two hour sleep-cycle where I shut myself down and all my internal systems run a self diagnostics check, seeing if there is any abnormalities and such. My personal power cells also go though a recharge as well, kinda like what you fleshes go though when you feel tired and have to take a nap for like eight hours or so and feel re-energized the next day. Well, I do that in about a quarter of that time and you can pretty much tell by now that I'm no ordinary human well in fact I'm not a human at all. I'm what you call a CAST, an artificial life form with the same humanly functions like the rest of you, only well we are made from complex circuits and metallic casing and parts. I would go into even more detail about who I am and stuff but I really don't feel like sharing it.
So anyway's, where was I? Oh right! I was 'waking up' from my 'nap' pulling the sheets and blankets away from my red gothic-styled bed, wearing just a frilly and small 'Panis Replica Sky' blue dress I recently acquired from the Player's Shop. The fabric feels pretty nice against my soft, pale artificial skin. Yeah that's right, unlike most people of my race, who are always hiding behind bulky CAST parts, I for one try to blend in with all those flesh and blood types, so I'm always trying out the latest fashions that the female Humans, and there counterpart race, the Newmans wear. I'll get into more detail about Newmans later. All you need to know now is that they look much like humans, except for their pointed ears. So yeah, I have the slender body of 19 year old female human, and built to perfect specifications. Most people around me say I should be some sort of supermodel but that's not the life for me. I have bigger responsibilities to worry about from my job alone, which is quite complicated to say the least. You see, I'm a member of the ARKS, an intergalactic task force that's in charge of keeping the peace throughout the universe. Again more details I would love to share about my job but let us just get on with my life shall we?
I start to slip off my dress which wasn't that hard to accomplish because of how the dress itself was designed, and considering how well endowed I was around my chest area. I don't get why my creator, who's name is Kai by the way, (kinda important to remember later on) had to give me such a slender body and such a large breast size. Just what was she thinking there? I swear is she some sort of....*ahem* I'm rambling again let me continue. Yeah I was pretty much fully undressed and I soaked myself inside the large porcelain and brass furnished hot tub that was already hot and steaming for me. There was also lovely rose petals inside the water which gave it a nice touch I though. Hey I'm a classy lady, so I love things like this. That moist hot water touching ever inch of my skin and hugging every curve of my body, it felt so damn good.
So yeah, I'm enjoying this lovely bath when suddenly I hear someone enter my room from the main entrance, I could tell because they steeped on my welcome mat when they entered, and it made a distinctive "woop woop" noise. In my room there are three additions, where the larger main room in the center was and where the main entrance was and I was in the other smaller addition on the left where my bedroom was and where I was bathing so they didn't see me right away. I'm pretty sure it was my sister, Tsunari coming to visit me, so I didn't feel too startled at first. So I simply closed my eyes and let the water calm my 'nerves' again, letting part of my head and my very long feathered white hair, soak deeper in the tub.
That was when I heard the automatic door in my room open up and sure enough when I started to open my deep blue eyes widely I saw a male with a grinning face that was quite distinguishable to being someone in there mid 30's or early 40's. I already knew who this creep was, as he was wearing his usual 'Adventos Black Sun' outfit, not too mention that silly tatter red scarf of his. "H-hey!!" I screamed out while I started to blush a deep red, yeah CAST can be built to mimic facial expression believe it or not. I quickly stood straight up, water splashing everywhere, which most likely startled the guy, while quickly holding my large breast together with a single arm out of shear modesty. Then with the other I grabbed a wooden bucket that had a pink bar of soap and a towel inside and threw it at the man's face scoring a direct hit hat his forehead. "The hell are you doing here, Mob?!" To be honest I so wanted to do that to him for so long. I just needed a good excuse to do so and I couldn't help but smirk, if only just a little bit to myself. He did deserve it after all. "Don't you even know how to knock first, perv?" I knew the answer to that already but I guess that couldn't really be helped so I simply sighed as I saw him slowly recover from being smacked in the head.
"...ouch....well that hurt. But it was still worth it seeing you like this, Kai." Mob kept his hungry glare at me, treating me as if I were some piece of eye candy. Of course he calls me by my creator's name instead of Keira, which could be understandable, considering the people who I work with seemed to get the two of us mixed up sometimes, but I'm use to it now.
"Yeah whatever, perv? You enjoying yourself now? Just give me my damn towel already!" I sighed once more and added quite sarcastically, still quite angered and flushed and extending my arm out to him until he did what I asked. I was quick to wrap it around myself, it quickly got wet sticking to me like it was a tight fitting strapless dress of some sorts. It was a bit transparent now but with my pale skin it was kind of hard to tell what was my skin or the fabric of the towel itself.
"I'm not a perv!" Mob quickly exclaimed back still rubbing the top of his head. "But there was a really good reason why I came over. And Link is with Coatl on an AQ in the Tundra so I had no one else to turn to."
"Yeah, like I really believe that," I simply rolled my eyes listening in on Mob's explanation for his sudden appearance as I got out of the tub and headed outside my back porch where my laundry machines and a sink was, as well as yet another bath tub was, but I rarely used that one. Mob of course was too eager to follow behind. I simply keeled on the floor and gazed at the mirror as I started to blow dry my long hair, being the pain the the ass it always been, just to even keep it looking good. Then I spoke to Mob while I keep my eye on him from the mirror in front of me as I was putting on some sort of hair product that would keep my hair styled the way it was. "So what's so damn important that you had to interrupt my bath time?"
Well that's pretty much it so far. Hope you enjoyed that sample. It might not be perfect but I'm trying to improve my writing as I go and I might make a few changes here and there. I might continue on the story later on and bring in more members from our team in on this.
If you want go ahead and post your own fanfics here. I'm curious to see how your style is compared to mine. If you are a writing expert yourself, let me know how I can improve. =D
Last edited by kaidrag0n on Sun May 19, 2013 11:41 pm; edited 1 time in total
kaidrag0n- Versatile Gunslinger
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Re: kaidrag0n's fanfic thread
nice nice, i moved this to separate board for now xD
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Yeah I wasn't sure were to put this before this board was created. But thanks =DTsunari wrote:nice nice, i moved this to separate board for now xD
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This is very cool. o: Good job kai. ;3 Hope to see more soon. When did you start writing kai?
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I guess I just not started just recently. But like I said before, I've done quite a large yet unfinished story when i was young. Too bad I never really put it on a computer or anything. =PCoatl wrote:This is very cool. o: Good job kai. ;3 Hope to see more soon. When did you start writing kai?
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I read your story and it was interesting enough for me to read to the end. I was hoping Keira and Mob would hook up.
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ミドリ★ wrote:I read your story and it was interesting enough for me to read to the end. I was hoping Keira and Mob would hook up.
Oh hey, me too!
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This was a neat little demo, thank you. Although admittedly, I found my immersion broken quite a few times, but it was very pleasant still.
When will we be seeing more?
When will we be seeing more?
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Shinonome wrote:This was a neat little demo, thank you. Although admittedly, I found my immersion broken quite a few times, but it was very pleasant still.
When will we be seeing more?
Yeah, I'll see if I can post another part this weekend or something. =P
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